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Re: Can Superman Outrun The Flash
to answer, Superman CANT outrun the flash. But when superman learns to fly, the flash says hes cheating! lol . Anyway, i think you have too many parts where the ...
Feb 25, 2005 -
Re: Reality
Think you're going to be in the spotlight Try looking around you You don't live in your own fairy tale You live in a world that's tough Try getting a ...
Feb 25, 2005 -
Re: word salad
though i can see it should be in the 'other poetry' forum, it also has a distant sense of being dramatic poetry. But i di think it was really cool ...
Feb 25, 2005 -
Re: Death Wish
very good sci-fi. I am currently working on my own piece. "Without warning, he saw the turret on the gunship turn toward him. At that second, he was looking down ...
Feb 25, 2005 -
Re: Dunno what this is...untitled.
"I am popular now, more popular than I have ever been. I just want someone to cuddle me and kiss me, " -okaaaaaayy, a little strange but thats alright...
Feb 25, 2005 -
Re: Renewal of Seeker of the Blade
While battle raged at local town squares, which had been commonplace for trade and event, women and children had been ushered into the stone manor of Lalthan." I really liked ...
Feb 25, 2005 -
Re: Vox
Your piece is very..... different. is the "us" this poem keeps refering to a ton of blood thirsty cannibals or something, cause it sure seems that way... :( Anyway, this ...
Feb 25, 2005 -
Re: Gash in Paris
Umm. I like your poem, but i wasn't able to get why it's under the lyric poetry forum. The beautiful thing about regular blood is that you can control the ...
Feb 25, 2005 -
Re: echoes of that sweet night
all i manage to create is a bucketful of meaningless e-mails that infect your inbox and limit our decaying relationship to nothing more than a few lines on an instant ...
Feb 25, 2005 -
Re: new here
*sniff* *sniff* its so beautiful and good... *sniff* I really like it. :cry: I really never lost someone I knew close, but some of my distant realatives have died. I ...
Feb 25, 2005 -
Re: In Pain, We Learn
Wow, its so pretty! [I probably shouldn't use that word....] Your writing is very meaningful. It shows power and addresses problems in the world (at least, how i see it). ...
Feb 25, 2005 -
Re: Closure
Your poem is quite strange in its writing, but unique in its point. "Does the satin on your bed remind you of white walls, fresh paint, the smell of new ...
Feb 25, 2005 -
Re: My First Poem
whatever thats supposed to mean...
Feb 20, 2005 -
Re: MINIMIZED!
Jake was heating up the oven, just like his mother instructed. They were going to have grilled fish and ramen tonight! Jake couldn't wait! "Honey, can you first sanitize the ...
Feb 20, 2005 -
Re: Once Upon a Time Land Gone Wrong
Her friend's teacher, Mr. Heliborne, was a short stout man who always was fiddling with papers on his desk when other students weren't looking. But Sarah was always the sneaky ...
Feb 20, 2005
